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Post by Dream Sequence on Jul 27, 2002 18:55:27 GMT 10
I have been writing poetry for about 6 months, here is some of my work, tell me what ya think My Work
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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 27, 2002 22:33:59 GMT 10
Your poems are cool, spicy vinaigrettes! Thanks, Nick
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Post by TheAstronaut on Jul 30, 2002 15:20:17 GMT 10
veeeeeery nice!! ;D i think i might do up a site for some of my stuff, i dunno....
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Post by left on Aug 5, 2002 19:02:47 GMT 10
oh that would be good!
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Post by loux2 on Aug 7, 2002 16:44:18 GMT 10
they're good, i like em i reckon they'd sound good as lyrics in a song or something..just an idea
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Post by Dream Sequence on Aug 8, 2002 16:18:25 GMT 10
thanks, some have been and will be used in songs for my band
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Post by Muzzy Pepped on Aug 8, 2002 19:19:25 GMT 10
Cool
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Post by natty on Aug 24, 2002 13:40:04 GMT 10
i read perception and found it reminding me of paul dempsey, but in an opposite way ie, people perceive paul as someone who is always depressed, unhappy, sombre etc, when really he's not that way at all. your poem describes someone who appears to be going along ok but deep down inside is full of torment and despair. or i could have completely misinterpreted your poem all together!
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Post by Dream Sequence on Aug 24, 2002 17:09:40 GMT 10
you summed it up quite well
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Post by natty on Aug 27, 2002 15:10:52 GMT 10
and there i was thinking my brain was too concrete to work out the abstract!
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Post by dirtgirl on Sept 1, 2002 11:46:11 GMT 10
your poem describes someone who appears to be going along ok but deep down inside is full of torment and despair. But isn't that true for most people? Anybody who has sucked the marrow of life carries the scars. Especially if the marrow you have been sucking is prickly...
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