I Can't Stop Thinking About You

[luceluna]

The stars wait, fat as eyes.
The mist, fresh in my bones, is calling;
My ears follow lines of crumpled soil.

Resting, you tense outwards.
I smell skin on my hands, elsewhere, and
Your fingers curled into my mouth.
Your neck is perfect;
I clasp your tender, throbbing chest.

There is stillness, away through your
Face - fire in your smile.
Already, entwined through the fields,
Rocks and structures dent the earth,
Colliding, lining the fog with grey.

[dirtgirl]

post more of your poems and prose luce...

[TheAstronaut]

great work Luceluna

ive found it hard to write about 'love' emotions. i wrote one but i feel really embarrassed about it...dunno why

[singingcirclesaway]

love is a pretty damned personal emotion, so don't feel embarassed deane. post away.

[dirtgirl]

Yes indeed...spread your love freely here people!

[left]

I can't write about love either.
I try but it doesn't every work.
I just write about-?
They are like abstracted poems.
They deal with ideas, rather than things.
Sometimes they are philosophies(sp)
Sometimes they are just plain weird....... ;D