Landline

[dirtgirl]

Landline

Your humanity,
Radiating. Fragile and sublime.
Humbleness met with understanding,
Penetrates me so.

Climaxing: Us:
My fertility cycle reaches its zenith,
Bathing you in creamy moonlight.

Love’s seeds sown deep;
Our vital liquids to water.
Ecstatic is the heat of our connection:
Through which we reap,
Our tender harvest.

[TheAstronaut]

i like the way the point is still strong but it seems to use diferent words to make itself known.

*not going off topic too much*
theres a blur song called 'Yuko + Hiro' and the verses are about japanese workers yet the chorus is about damon's girlfriend, which i found was a great combination. id suggest it as a download, because the soft melody fits both parts of the song...

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I love how you used the word 'zenith'
I was sitting in class writing something a few weeks ago and I had 'zenith' in it. The person next to me read it and just goes "Hmmmmmmm it's good, what the hell's a zenith?"