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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 14, 2002 20:09:55 GMT 10
Private Universe
You,
Echoing,
Down the line. Your voice,
A sweet song; timbre so warm.
Soothing lullaby,
For this soul.
Me.
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Post by TheAstronaut on Jul 15, 2002 14:31:53 GMT 10
good use of the word 'timbre' Di.
the way a private universe can never be exploited is wonderful because no one can get in nor out
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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 15, 2002 23:11:48 GMT 10
exactly. The poem actually is a type of haiku as well as a message for somebody. Did anyone pick up on the subliminal mathematical message?   |
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Post by TheAstronaut on Jul 16, 2002 7:52:40 GMT 10
something to do with dempsey?
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Post by Muzzy Pepped on Jul 16, 2002 12:15:03 GMT 10
Is the answer 5? But seriously, what is it?  |
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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 16, 2002 14:24:38 GMT 10
no it has nothing to do with Dempsey. The person in question knows who he is.  and as for the message, think of a geometric sequence consisting of odd numbers... |
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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 16, 2002 21:29:20 GMT 10
well done fraenata!! ;D The classic haiku is 5 - 7 - 5 but I like to experiment! I might try one based on polynomials next!  |
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Post by Catfish on Jul 17, 2002 2:09:51 GMT 10
And on another note, the first letters of each line almost contains all the letters in DEMPSEY.
Just change the F to an E/P and/or the A to an E/P.
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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 20, 2002 0:04:21 GMT 10
talk about the subconscious! |
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Post by TheAstronaut on Jul 20, 2002 14:25:35 GMT 10
what amazing observations
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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 20, 2002 21:37:25 GMT 10
the perfect marriage between art and science!! ;D It's nice when the neurons fire on both sides... |
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Post by left on Jul 27, 2002 0:42:30 GMT 10
Wow, I can't believe how many things you guys came up with! Very observant people. |
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Post by TheAstronaut on Jul 27, 2002 9:42:14 GMT 10
haikus were strange when i first did em
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Post by dirtgirl on Jul 27, 2002 22:38:41 GMT 10
haikus are like sherbert bombs...full of surprises! |
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