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Post by dirtgirl on Jun 8, 2002 17:54:21 GMT 10
Salty tears,
Cascading upon skin against skin,
Unspoken desires and deep longings,
Intangibles now realised,
Absorbed through this joyous connection.
Cocooned in our embrace,
The jigsaw puzzle that is Us,
Is finally complete.
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Post by Muzzy Pepped on Jun 11, 2002 1:08:06 GMT 10
Very cool dirtgirl  |
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Post by singingcirclesaway on Jun 11, 2002 1:50:42 GMT 10
i whole-heartedly agree. love your work, di. if you ever feel like passing on any of your talent, i'm here you know.  |
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Post by TheAstronaut on Jun 14, 2002 17:12:20 GMT 10
maybe ill give you my crap talents mel  nice poem di especially the conclusion about us being a puzzle |
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Post by left on Jun 14, 2002 20:27:56 GMT 10
Well done Di. I love the puzzle part.
I wrote something with a puzzle in it once. It was something like this-
You're like a billion piece jigsaw puzzle,
There are so parts that make up you.
At least I think that's how it went.....
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Post by singingcirclesaway on Jun 15, 2002 0:54:17 GMT 10
any talent is appreciated, crap or not, as i have none. boo.  |
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Post by dirtgirl on Jun 15, 2002 2:18:16 GMT 10
thanks... |
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Post by somethingforkaty on Jun 16, 2002 0:03:45 GMT 10
Yes indeed it is! I love it that all you guys are posting your works here for us all to enjoy |
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